Post by derpghost on Dec 3, 2017 7:15:17 GMT
So, I thought I could write some little Pokemon short stories. I don't know if this will be a regular thing.Gem Run
The Sableye slid into a side branch of the tunnel, a large chunk of amethyst underneath his arm. He had to move, fast, or he was screwed. He took another turn just as a massive roar shook the tunnel. The Sableye stumbled and fell, swore, and scrambled back to his feet, grabbing the precious rock and starting to run again. He took a few more turns, trying to remember the path he took earlier, and a new sound started, some massive churning noise that seemed to vibrate the stones on the floor. It got louder, and the Darkness Pokemon's eyes widened as he realized what that sound was. He skidded to a abrupt stop just as a Gabite exploded through the cave wall in front of him. It turned to the Sableye, looking incredibly angry. "THERE YOU ARE!"
The gem-eyed Pokemon stepped back a little, grinning nervously and twitching like mad. "H-Hey there, your day been good? Well, I don't really have time to chat, so I'll just be-aaahhHHHH!" He jumped to the side as the Gabite slammed a bladed arm into the ground where he was standing. The Sableye turned and ran, swearing repeatedly as the Gabite struggled with dislodging his arm from the ground. He saw a hole a ways above him, and started climbing up the wall, the amethyst crammed in his mouth. He heard thundering footsteps behind him, and the Gabite shouting. "Get BACK HERE, YOU LITTLE THIEF!" The Sableye had just managed to get into the opening as a large array of teeth snapped shut just below him. He scrambled the rest of the way up and breathed in relief as he saw the familiar supports and lanterns of the mine. There was a final roar of anger from the Gabite below as they gave up, and the imp-like Pokemon, now safe, hurried back to his nest to enjoy his meal.
Please tell me what you thought of this, criticism is welcome!
The Sableye slid into a side branch of the tunnel, a large chunk of amethyst underneath his arm. He had to move, fast, or he was screwed. He took another turn just as a massive roar shook the tunnel. The Sableye stumbled and fell, swore, and scrambled back to his feet, grabbing the precious rock and starting to run again. He took a few more turns, trying to remember the path he took earlier, and a new sound started, some massive churning noise that seemed to vibrate the stones on the floor. It got louder, and the Darkness Pokemon's eyes widened as he realized what that sound was. He skidded to a abrupt stop just as a Gabite exploded through the cave wall in front of him. It turned to the Sableye, looking incredibly angry. "THERE YOU ARE!"
The gem-eyed Pokemon stepped back a little, grinning nervously and twitching like mad. "H-Hey there, your day been good? Well, I don't really have time to chat, so I'll just be-aaahhHHHH!" He jumped to the side as the Gabite slammed a bladed arm into the ground where he was standing. The Sableye turned and ran, swearing repeatedly as the Gabite struggled with dislodging his arm from the ground. He saw a hole a ways above him, and started climbing up the wall, the amethyst crammed in his mouth. He heard thundering footsteps behind him, and the Gabite shouting. "Get BACK HERE, YOU LITTLE THIEF!" The Sableye had just managed to get into the opening as a large array of teeth snapped shut just below him. He scrambled the rest of the way up and breathed in relief as he saw the familiar supports and lanterns of the mine. There was a final roar of anger from the Gabite below as they gave up, and the imp-like Pokemon, now safe, hurried back to his nest to enjoy his meal.
Please tell me what you thought of this, criticism is welcome!